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Wednesday, 26 February 2014

The zone of fear

I am scared
as a child in the night
I am scared
as a vampire in the light

I pass bravely
through the zone of fear
I pass bravely
it is nothing severe

This sacrifice
is so little
This sacrifice
is a beetle

At the end
awaits a hug of a good weather
At the end
awaits a kiss of a treasure
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7 comments:

  1. a furious child26 February 2014 at 23:09

    I like the last stanza *thumbs up*

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  2. Kristy Rulebreaker26 February 2014 at 23:31

    Thank you! :) I like it too. :)

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  3. Swati Sarangi1 March 2014 at 08:46

    words have resonating effect!! Your love for poetry is not a secret.. every one knows you write well!! Cheers,Kristy!! :)

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  4. Kristy Rulebreaker1 March 2014 at 19:02

    Thank you Swati! Cheers! :)

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  5. Kristy Rulebreaker2 March 2014 at 22:56

    Thank you very much! :)

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  6. Katya W. Mills28 March 2014 at 11:20

    I do not like fear, no, not at all. I do not like fear, walking down the hall. I do not like fear, no, not today. I can only hope to have the courage. for that I pray.

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    1. Kristy Rulebreaker28 March 2014 at 14:39

      Thank you very much! Your short poem is beautiful. :) I could just add something, if you don't mind:"I don not like fear, no, not today, or any other day." :)

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