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Wednesday, 28 January 2015

The Critics

In my country
more than humans
we have critics

Right now two birds
are criticizing a man
who just passed this way

Here the critics
just as apples
fall on the heads
from the trees

Here you are never
pretty enough
good enough
nor wise enough

If you want to get rid of
your status of a saint
come here and we will attach
more crime on your file

2 comments:

  1. Beauty! Critics are a bane to society. I have always wondered what gives people the right to criticize others.

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    1. Thank you very much Phil! :) I wonder it too. :(

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